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    the heart is for taking away,,

    like kites on flight, entangled
    one has to go down
    for the other to soar high
    my life-thread broken
    i take a dip
    thrash my heart on a tree branch
    i went down
    i donno where i left my heart
    whether the other kite plucked from me
    or my heart got pinned on the pointed branch
    for it pained when going down
    i donno where i left my heart
    i lost it somewhere on the way
    i sink into the muddy sand

    [some blood and sand splashed on the kite
    funny design, someone who saw the kite said]

    how true tagore said,
    the heart is for taking away,,


    have u ever flied a kite?
    u know what happens when you fly with another kite..
    the threads get tangled, in a mess
    unless one is cut off,
    it will be doom for both..
    life is like that..
    you go high with someone
    but if u dont heed
    life can be a mess
    it can cost you so much of life!!

    well i wrote this after a kite fest at goa,,
    it was amusing
    but i found some things were akin to the
    plight i had in my own life..

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    Very interesting write with some amazing images. I really enjoyed the read, thank you.

    Take care........Sue

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