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    Critzice. yOu know you want to!

    Galatea

    Muticolored tints
    Grabbing hold of the eyes
    Just one glance
    To get lost in perfection

    Molded so soflty
    Charming elegance
    Made and remade
    In sleepless nights

    Downward curves gracing
    Please a thousand eyes
    Cracked apart
    Revealing the inside

    Crisscrosed in ribbons
    Of dream-cobalt blue
    Multicolored expression
    And the subtleness of obsidian blades

    A thousand letters engraved
    Into whitisht pigment
    Green-emerald sight
    Piercing much too bright

    Swirling temptation
    And palid dedication
    Loveless compassion
    Threaded and made

    With golden architecture
    Sea-tints azure
    Delicate palm lines
    Ruffled pages in dreams

    A thousand inks
    A star-studded edge
    Of humanity

    Graced
    With phantasmagoric bioluminiscence
    Burning embers making
    A structure silver tight

    Surrounded and held
    By a thousand thought-threads
    Burning much too bright
    The beauty of iron knives

    A dream
    Forever aloof

    Made and remade until is truth
    A masterpiece
    Of life and lust

    What or who could it be?
    None
    Never
    As beautiful as you



    Aracna

    Frozen forever in ice
    Captivate me with your smile
    Write with that blood-red ink
    Drank straight from my lips

    Taunt me with long pale fingers
    Weaving silky strands of thought
    Dance a song that turns forever
    Weaving paths into the falling snow

    If only I could scream
    Those words I feel
    A four letter lie
    Written in your skin

    Forever lost
    In those dreams
    You wove unto me.


    Semblance of a God
    Look at my arms
    Crisscrossed by scars
    As my body hangs above
    And look below

    To see is to believe
    So dip your finger here
    And see if you won't come away
    With blood

    Rusty nails
    Are nothing new
    Falling away
    No scars

    What will you say father
    As I die
    Resurection on your hands

    Rip the sky into tears of black
    Burn the skin so decadent, crips
    It looks like blood on your lips

    And may I breathe again
    Resurrection is but
    a game.

    And may I dream again
    To die once and then
    be forever your lord savior


    Cute Without The E
    Dragging scars on her arms
    As others glance
    And look away, again
    The blood that runs down to her hands
    Blossoms from wrists neatly bandaged

    Long curling hair covering her face
    Where those eyes almost seem to burn
    A gaze the brown of soft curling earth
    She's all alone

    One face in a sea of faces
    One girl of more in a hallway
    Who can hope to understand?
    When no one will and no one tries?

    They stand there
    No move, no soul
    As she falls slowly to the floor

    Hits her head and bleeds to life
    The pain makes her feel alive
    Disgust shows as others walk by
    Who will comfort her when she cries?

    When the blade is only a fad.
    She's cute without the e
    A silver star

    A girl like others
    She thinks as she dies
    Who bleeds oncemore
    Just to know she is
    ALIVE


    Belle Morte
    She sits
    Her bloody head reclining
    Against the towel trailing fresh dye
    A crimson splash
    A momment lost

    She sits and sights
    Staring at her arm
    Where the razor cut

    And every day is the same
    On her wrist a tally
    Made of scars

    Even thought she'll never know
    I call her beautiful
    If only she'll smile.

    I'm next to her,
    Trying to help
    Dye and bleach stray strands

    'I love you'
    and 'You're Beautiful'
    Fortnight later
    I whisper on the phone

    She says, what's that?
    Nothing.
    The comMent
    If only I could go back in time.

    A day again
    She hangs with shame
    From above cord streching tight

    A smile so bright
    On the face of death
    and on her hand a note.

    Surrounded by all.
    I read:

    "I only wish
    Before I die
    For love and Beauty
    I, loveless and humane
    but never a face
    Can't bear this life
    Goodbye friends"

    A tear on my eye
    As I try not to cry
    A word on my lips "I love you
    and even in death, you're still beautiful"

    Someone behind me asks
    What's that again?
    I look behind,
    hands on pockets tight
    and whisper....


    Nothing.
    Shall these bones live?

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