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    <A Season In Hellii>

    You wake up
    Follow the sun

    No bible in hand
    A piece of patisserie rotted
    My skin left on you
    A stranger's face
    Yersterday wasn't pale

    A season in hell
    Darkness wears a tutu turning around
    No stream flirts with a drunk boat
    No sinner gathered
    Sun is absent

    Winter invited summer to come
    Spring's jaw down
    Fall falls with lonely sound

    A season in hell
    Bodies knot
    Tireness not

    Wake up
    Your face appers not
    Blank painting
    Rain runs into my veins
    Sleep a sleep
    A transparent dream

    A season in hell
    Hands hold not
    Nothing attacks my fort
    Frozen soil
    Blissfully bites my feet
    feu de joie (french, means salute)
    An honored lamster runs

    Up wake, up
    Birds stole my tart
    Steal a kiss over my lips
    Your color is on me
    Unfailing breath blows my walls
    Shake the sheet
    You disappeared underneath

    Wake up ,up
    My Muse is drawing a mouse-like potato
    Fills me with loveliness

    A season in hell
    Sleep a sleep
    No gate to Mecca
    Wake up
    Wake me up
    No gate to hell

    Baptised in a coffee bath
    Follow time
    Head for Halidom

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    Last edited by Avalive; 04-02-2004 at 05:36 AM.
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    Ever Benevolent and Wise
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    Very interesting ...

    I like the absurd juxtapositions you suggest here... tutus, drunk boats and whatnot. It's all lively and sinister at the same time! Love it.

    Welcome to the forums Avalive.

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    Sinister is exactly the word that crossed my mind too den. Not a poem that leaves you feeling warm inside, but thoughful. Great.

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    Thanks for reading.
    It was probably not written by me. I was thinking that maybe there were some playful spirits used my hand and pen for their little diaries. For this poem. After I finished it. I read. I love it.
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    Just try to capture those playful spirits again.

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    Yea, that's a great way to see it Avalive, I wish I could access mine, I'm sure they're in here somewhere!

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    Inspiration needs trigger...
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