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    Cool

    Ineptitude is
    something which really disturbs
    the core of myself.

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    Flamboyance projects
    pride and conceit,
    antipathy and wrath,
    and the other faculties
    which degrade the body and soul...
    My hide hides the heart inside

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    Cool Clarification Haikus.

    Hi! The only "Rule"
    to follow in this Thread is,

    "Be not obscene, please."

    Also, please be sure
    to use the standard Haiku
    format from now on.




    Thank you.

    Sincerely,

    Uncle Lar

  4. #49

    Cool Haikuless.

    I hope I won't be
    Haikuless; I really love
    the Haiku format!



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    Cool Time Management.

    Time Management, in
    this high tech day and age, is
    very important.

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    Cool The Weekend!

    The Weekend has come,
    and I depart to enjoy
    it; have a good one!


    Sincerely,

    Uncle Lar



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    Exclamation Write Me a HaiKu

    Get a clue, Sherlock—
    Shock poetry not stylish
    Anymore here these days…

    Write of love and pain—
    Ecstasy and broken dreams
    Show us—do not tell…

    How does rejection
    Really tear a heart—rip it
    Apart, make you cry?

    A tender moment,
    How it seems to last forever—
    Replayed in your dreams…

    Tears fall like the rain—
    Heart shatters, glass imprisoned—
    Joy soars on the wind…

    Let us have beauty—
    Come tempt us—flirtatious words
    Even darkness made real…

    Pendragon
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    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    we know where we are,
    when life's Hell brings pain,
    we have few to guide us
    through immolation lane
    Talk of happiness--
    Elated thoughts,
    to curtail the strain,
    we feel from antagnostic eyes,
    seeping life turned old,
    from wisps of abound aesthetics,
    to dreams turned obscured mold
    --like Saruman's oscillating eye,
    whites of pupils supplanted gold--

    (sorry, I don't know the standard Haiku format)
    My hide hides the heart inside

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    Exclamation

    Quote Originally Posted by Adolescent09 View Post
    (sorry, I don't know the standard Haiku format)
    'Dole, a Haiku has seventeen syllables, divided thus:
    5 in the first line
    7 in the second
    5 in the third

    To do a poem in Haiku, connect Haiku until you reach your point. Here, no form to follow. On the other thread, last line of the previous Haiku becomes the first line of the next, so follow suit. You can still get amazing results!

    Taking time to explain
    The rules and regulations—
    Just shows that you care…

    We are here for fun,
    Writing is our green playground—
    Leave none misinformed…

    Common courtesy,
    Once shown, will be remembered—
    And returned in kind


    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

  10. #55

    Cool

    Haiku is not hard;
    just follow the Haiku Rules
    and craft your Language.

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    Then you'll understand
    How very easy it is
    to start writing them
    "O reason, reason, abstract phantom of the waking state, I had already expelled you from my dreams, now I have reached a point where those dreams are about to become fused with apparent realities: now there is only room here for myself. "
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    I so love Haikus
    I scribble them all the time
    for my enjoyment
    "O reason, reason, abstract phantom of the waking state, I had already expelled you from my dreams, now I have reached a point where those dreams are about to become fused with apparent realities: now there is only room here for myself. "
    -Louis Aragon


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    I once wrote Haikus
    over and over one day
    Then my hand was tired
    "O reason, reason, abstract phantom of the waking state, I had already expelled you from my dreams, now I have reached a point where those dreams are about to become fused with apparent realities: now there is only room here for myself. "
    -Louis Aragon


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    Now I have to leave
    For the bell tolleth for me
    I now go to school
    "O reason, reason, abstract phantom of the waking state, I had already expelled you from my dreams, now I have reached a point where those dreams are about to become fused with apparent realities: now there is only room here for myself. "
    -Louis Aragon


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    (good bye!)
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    -Louis Aragon


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