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    Letting Go.

    Letting Go.

    My heart belongs to another
    Yet its you I love
    Thinking about you for hours
    You couldn’t possibly be the angel from above
    What I feel is wrong
    Is it love, or is it lust
    Hours spent slaving away for you
    But you only kick my feelings to dust
    You toy with my heart
    You play with my feelings
    Recovering from a battle within
    My bodies still healing
    You’ve possessed my soul
    Getting lost in your eyes
    You screw me round, leaving me hanging
    My rage only intensifies
    You show off what you’ve got
    Driving me insane
    Sharing with everybody else
    Leaving me nothing but pain
    No matter what I do for you
    The fire between us slowly dies
    No matter how far I reach out
    You ignore my cries
    Maybe this is a simple message
    It just wasn’t meant to be
    I guess this is goodbye
    I’m finally letting go. Setting my feelings for you free…


    I havent written anything in about 4 months.
    So I gave it a shot the other night.
    Feed would be nice.

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    I enjoy this poem. It is kind of like what is going on in my life, but I still can't let him go.
    Enough about my issues. I believe this is a pretty well written poem for not have been writing in four months.
    JUST KEEP SWIMMING!
    JUST KEEP SWIMMING!
    JUST KEEP SWIMMING, SWIMMING, SWIMMING!
    WHAT DO WE DO?

    WE SWIM!

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    Thank you.

    Yeah, its kind of a lie. I dont think I can let go though...

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    lol I don't think any one could let go it is humanly impossible. But the poem is on an emotional subject that could put a few heart strings.
    JUST KEEP SWIMMING!
    JUST KEEP SWIMMING!
    JUST KEEP SWIMMING, SWIMMING, SWIMMING!
    WHAT DO WE DO?

    WE SWIM!

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    Thanks.
    You're brobably right.
    No-one sees the color of your eyes. No-one sees you smile. No-one knows the secrets that you hide. No-one sees you cry.

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    I really enjoyed it too... you are talented..indeed...
    and ya,, you did not write anything for 4 months!!!
    I write evry night, you really shoul give your writting more time...

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