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    Registered User Delta40's Avatar
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    Recrimination

    Birds will sing
    on the day I deface
    gouge
    and erase
    all memory of this monster,
    starting with sinewy arms
    snaking round my neck

    As I crouch
    in the stoning
    with my suffering offspring,
    at least let me
    slice off the heads
    of my own toxic hydra
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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    Still, on a chalk plateau Bar22do's Avatar
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    I'm eagerly waiting for that day birds will sing, ah, Delta. Always a pleasure to read you (I mean whatever the subject).

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    confidentially pleased cacian's Avatar
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    Wow this is scary...I really hope you do not have to reach out for such drastic measures haha.
    Birds singing is much bette.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    riding a cosmic vortex MystyrMystyry's Avatar
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    Where are you at Delta?

    This has got me confused a bit with the what's what aspect. Firstly outwardly its the N referring to a monster, then later the N seems to be the monster?

    Evocative word choices but as I say, a little muddled.

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