New Poetry Game-Cinquain Chain- Come on, it's easy and fun!

[mazHur]

someday
a cool breeze will
blow from the greener world
and quench the fire of my heart with
one touch

[CdnReader]

one touch
is all i need
to fall, senseless, dreaming,
unconscious to all the world brings
this day

[mazHur]

for life
has ironies
and what we want and do
fade away in fate's twisty traits
someday

Edit: Okay i couldnt beat u this time .

("......is it the sari
or you" -------> definitely me! what are saris without upbeat ladies?! )


or you,
my darling friend,
could not devise praises
in wonderful worlds of words, sought
in me

ofcourse, its YOU! A sari is worthless if worn by someone other than you; it won't have the proverbial green sheen!

[mazHur]

one touch
is all i need
to fall, senseless, dreaming,
unconscious to all the world brings
this day

this day
belongs to you
or me I do not know;
you are in my eyes, am in yours
no walls!

[symphony]

*whistles*



This day
has brought to me
a world of thoughts, passing
by like sudden flashes of lights
long gone.

Edit: Duh!

No walls
can or will part
minds in unison. Us,
we live lives to argue, what do
we know?

[mazHur]

we know
enough to know
what is in your fold what's
in mine; it's all up to us now
to choose!

[symphony]

to choose,
you may, decide
where: here we're bound in hours
of pretexts, bound in blind senses
of goals...

[mazHur]

to choose,
you may, decide
where: here we're bound in hours
of pretexts, bound in blind senses
of goals...

wow, this is too romantic for me!!
well done!

of goals
is good to think,
of ambitions one must;
this is your life you must decide
freely!

[symphony]

Freely
into the fall.
I fall with the others,
the other prejudiced souls, all.
We fall.

[mazHur]

We fall
if we fail to
stand ; falling doesn't mean
you cannot stand again;Robert
Bruce proved.

[qimissung]

Bruce proved
persistence is
all~it can unite a
nation, or just we two. Will You?
I do.

[qimissung]

one touch
is all i need
to fall, senseless, dreaming,
unconscious to all the world brings
this day

This is beautiful!!!

[CdnReader]

Thanks, Qim!

* * * * *

I do,
and I feel, and
I move, and I think, and
I despair, and I exult, and
I am.

[mazHur]

I am
you say but you
hardly know who you are
or where you'll go one day wages
been done!

[CdnReader]

^^^ Congrats on 2,000 posts, Maz.

* * * * *

been done,
been there, been here,
been lost, been found again,
been up, been over, been around,
been me.