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    Fragment

    Here's a fragment of poetry I wrote years ago. I know its not much but I would like to know what you think as I am thinking of writing poetry again

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    Flowers for them were vague
    when after they made the hissing grade
    This museum will celebrate the culture of the snake
    "Success means death of the intellect and the imagination."
    James Joyce, Ulysses

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    hmm... i don't get it...
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    Hm, is that about celebrating the misfortune shown through the mistakes of others, as seen in the Garden of Eden?

    heh.. wild guess.
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    feel obtuse, foggybrained; what am i missing?

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    Originally posted by Dyrwen
    Hm, is that about celebrating the misfortune shown through the mistakes of others, as seen in the Garden of Eden?

    heh.. wild guess.
    No, I think its about reading too much French Symbolist poetry but I like your suggestion.

    Thanks
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    Ah, well I wouldn't know much about French symbolism, let alone other poetry. Heh.. that'd explain that much.
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