It was my pleasure.
It was my pleasure.
In these days, old man, no one thinks in terms of human beings. Governments don't, so why should we? They talk of the people, the proletariat, and I talk of the mugs. It's the same thing. They have their five year plan and I have mine.-Harry Lime, The Third Man novella by Graham Greene
Hello, Ace, I won't criticise your work, for the others have made good points. I just wanted to say that overall the story was well done, I enjoyed reading it very much. As well, I would like to wish you luck in the writing competition for your school.
Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
~Albert Einstein
Update: Didn't win.
But you tried, and you have a powerful story written and shared with us, who appreciated your endeavor. Keep that pen moving, Ace, you are a great writer.
Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
~Albert Einstein
So what became of this unnamed soldier? It's not clear if he continued his service in the SS afterward.
You know how I like to work in bible verses in my stories? Here's a sentence I would add if it were one of mine.
"The night was unusually still at 4:22 AM. It was time for our exodus."
Hi Ace
I like your story. Mcory, Zippy, and SheykAbdullah have been much help
to you. Go on writing more stories. Godspeed.
Thanks. I actually wrote one that I MAY be willing to share... but I don't share my material very often, only shared this because... well, I don't know really, lol.
Just watch out for a new post by Ace.