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    Tragedy of Life

    Tragedy of Life

    I watched you die a thousand times
    before there was a you and I,
    I would see your eyes
    staring back at me through their faces
    with every new tragedy.

    I can only marvel at fortune's fate
    which against insurmountable odds
    led you to find your way to me,
    for across distances of space,
    my heart called out to yours,
    but then we were only children
    floundering our way through the world.

    And yet death still lingers too close
    for comfort, I can see its stalking shadow
    where others pass innocently by
    never suspecting, but we have both known
    too much of pain and violence,
    we have both stood on the precipice
    staring death in the face
    ready to accept his outstretched hand.

    Now there is nothing I can do
    but hold on as tight as I can
    and be thankful for your every breath,
    inhale your every word,
    I can take no single touch,
    for granted, but your life is a celebrating
    every morning we both wake up.

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    A very nice appreciation of the present moment and those we are fortunate to be with. Most of us take too much for granted.

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    There is so tragedy in coming to the conclusion that each day celebrates "us", even though we may not exist tomorrow, as is stated in the poem. Although I found this to be more like prose than your usual poetry, I still enjoyed your message!

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