A short story I wrote for my school's literary magazine. Also it's pretty much the first short story I've ever written.
A short story I wrote for my school's literary magazine. Also it's pretty much the first short story I've ever written.
Last edited by superunknown; 06-01-2006 at 06:28 PM.
"In the sunset of dissolution, everything is illuminated by the aura of nostalgia, even the guillotine."
- Milan Kundera, The Unbearable Lightness of Being
Thoughts? Ideas? Comments? Suggestions? Criticisms? Acknowledgements of existence?
"In the sunset of dissolution, everything is illuminated by the aura of nostalgia, even the guillotine."
- Milan Kundera, The Unbearable Lightness of Being
It's good and interesting...
isn't it a lot like 'Phsyco,' though?
Yeah, it is. I thought about that as I was writing it, but I thought, "eh, whatever." I just like the idea of a really twisted "happy ending."
"In the sunset of dissolution, everything is illuminated by the aura of nostalgia, even the guillotine."
- Milan Kundera, The Unbearable Lightness of Being
yeah you did a really good job writing it and its interesting so whatev
I agree your style of writting is very good. It sort of remids me of Anne Rice and her vampire chronicles crossed with Edgar Allen Poe. That was a very good story, it kinda went fast and there was no....suspension, a build up to the climax of the story. But other then that and other smaller details, I really enjoyed it.
Even if you embrace me until it's suffocating
We will never become one.
O cold that starts before dawn,
Please light the path that's just for us.
nice story
Yeah, I could have made it something like 8-10 pages but it was written for my school's literary magazine and I couldn't make it too long so there wasn't much room to build up to the end. Thanks for your comments.
"In the sunset of dissolution, everything is illuminated by the aura of nostalgia, even the guillotine."
- Milan Kundera, The Unbearable Lightness of Being
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