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    dancing

    Dance with me under the stars
    Forget this world
    Leave it all behind
    Forget your worries
    For just this one dance
    Dance with me in the eye of the moon
    Washing all the worries away
    Dancing like itís what we were meant to do
    Looking like an angle
    Singing like a bird
    The night is still young
    Holding me tight
    Swaying form left to right
    This will be the last time we meet
    Dancing like this
    Midnight is coming
    And the night will then end
    So lets dance with the stars in the eye of the moon
    Wind blowing, trainís whistles
    How long will we stay on this balcony?
    To dance like this
    To feel this way
    It tells me that this is right
    Your eyes, your touch
    With music around
    The night is ending
    And it will be done
    Wind dying, trains fading
    Moon so bright I see you smile
    Wishing upon the stars that you never forget
    So before we both forget
    And leave this place
    Share this last dance with me
    Last edited by spally; 02-26-2007 at 03:12 AM.

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    still waiting to be found amanda_isabel's Avatar
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    i like it!
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    Thumbs up Dancing

    I enjoyed your poem.

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    thank you.

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    i think this one is my fav so far it kinda has like a free feeling to it.

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    I could see you were a long timer returning, so just had a look at your back catalogue and found this from 2006. You are gonna have to trust me I found it after writing 'Let's dance', but I was struck by the similarities and 4 years on would like to add my appreciation to your poem as a very late arrival ( almost terminal )
    Jerry

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    i trust you, and thanks. not all my stuff is that great, half the time it just comesout and i put in down. lol

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    I like this poem. it has a nice romantic pace to it
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