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    tick tock

    time moves by slowly as
    i hear the ticking of the watch
    on my wrist

    i look down and memory
    floods my brain
    pictures in my mind
    refuse to leave
    and as I feel myself
    being pulled under
    i gasp and beg for it to please....
    stop.

    it seems now that
    time
    only makes things clearer
    when I'd rather they'd
    just fade---down
    and away.

    the good things drown
    my thoughts and
    the bad seem to be
    forgotten,
    there was a reason
    for this,
    for all of this but now
    I want reality to step
    aside.

    for just a moment?

    and somewhere between
    the tears that drip down
    my skin and the cry
    of a child in need
    i remember...
    why.

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    i liked it a lot.
    nice imagery
    "marijuana leads to pacifism and communist brainwashing." ~h.a

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    Thanks!

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