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    help~~did anybody read this poem before?

    recently, i read a poem from "poetry 180"..the name of the poem is "Ever After". it is written by Joyce Sutphen. share with everybody with your thought...

    Ever After
    by Joyce Sutphen

    What am I to you now that you are no
    longer what you used to be to me?

    Who are we to each other now that
    there is no us, now that what we once

    were is divided into me and you
    who are not one but two separate and

    unrelated persons except for that ex-
    that goes in front of the words

    that used to mean me, used to mean
    you, words we rarely used (husband, wife)

    as when we once posed (so young and helpless)
    with our hands (yours, mine) clasped on the knife

    that was sinking into the tall white cake.
    All that sweetness, the layers of one thing
    and then another, and then one thing again

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    nobody read this poem at all?

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    i have now - i like it!
    'We don't read and write poetry because it's cute. We read and write poetry becasue we are members of the human race.'
    - Mr D. Keating Dead Poets Society

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    Quote Originally Posted by Truth Untold
    i have now - i like it!
    so, how you feel? do you think this is a sad poem? do you think that the poet and her husband are still friends?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Truth Untold
    i have now - i like it!
    any commons about this poem?

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    This poem sounds more like a parable to me ...Inclined to say some good words about it ...Far from being exceptional,but frankly touching...
    Se puede matar el hombre
    Pero no mataran la forma
    En que se alegraba su alma
    Cuando souaba ser libre
    ......
    They can kill a man/but they cannot kill the way /his soul rejoices/when it dreams/that it is free
    ....
    A folklore song from Venecuela

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    initially it reminded me of my ex until i realsied it was a husband and wife - but it still applies i guess.
    layers of the cake jump out as being aymbolic to me - something like as they go thorugh the marriage they'll strip away each others layers and see each other for what they really are maybe.
    'We don't read and write poetry because it's cute. We read and write poetry becasue we are members of the human race.'
    - Mr D. Keating Dead Poets Society

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    Good poem... really sad though

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