I have recently written this poem. Your comments will be really appreciated.
Switching Place
Hello was said by earth to sky.
Sky then happily uttered hi
If I ask you something, Will you mind?
I am very unhappy, will you be kind?
Oh my dear earth, what is that you want?
I will try to help you or should I taunt?
I want you to do me a favor, dear sky
It might be difficult but it is worth a try
Oh my sister, tell me what is it and then I will try
I am not sure that I will do it so I will not tell a lie
Ah, my brother, you are so good, elegant and kind
If you will not do it, then also I will certainly not mind
Now tell me what is that you want me to do?
Will you tell me because I have not got a clue?
O sky, will you be able to take my place?
If you will do this, wouldn’t it be grace?
Why do you want to switch place?
What is the matter, what is the case?
You are sky and you are better.
You are up and you do matter
How does it matter?
What is the better?
You are blue and beautiful and it looks like you have wings
I am desperate because I am used by human beings.
Look my sister, you live with company
You are not lonely so you should be merry.
You are sky and they look at you for shelter
People seek your help so you should matter.
I do matter but you also matter because people ask you for food.
You provide them fruits, vegetables and stuff when you are in a good mood.
My dear sky, now you have made me happy and glad
You are right that I should not be sad or mad
I do matter and you do matter
In this universe, nothing is litter
This was the tale of earth and sky
They lived happily then, it is not a lie
Now hear this thing
And you will cry
Now both of them are unhappy
Because they are used badly
People don’t use them for good so they are very mad
If you will be good to each other, they will not be so sad.
Help earth, sky, yourself and I
Now don’t ask me why
Thanks for giving it your time. You can be harsh in your comments because it will teach me to write better poetry.