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    i hate you

    i hate you
    i hate everything about you
    the way you look at me
    the way you talk to me
    even the way you hold me
    i hate it when you say my name
    when you pull me close
    i hate your eyes
    i hate your smile
    OMG i hate you
    so why are you all that i think about
    cause i hate you so much i love you
    your eyes
    your smile
    your voice
    your touch
    when you pull me close and hold me
    i love you so much it hurts to hate
    i don't wanna be with you
    but i can't stand to not be
    i hate you
    you stupid a$$
    why can't you see
    that i love you so much its killing me inside
    you need to die
    but if you did
    my soul would die with you
    why do i hate you with such passion
    but love you with such pain
    .............screw this
    ....i love you

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    I'm sorry to say this because I doubt it's deliberate, but this reminds me so much of the poem that Kat reads out at the end of "10 Things I Hate About You", that I can't help but think of it - here it is for comparison:

    I hate the way you talk to me,
    and the way you cut your hair.
    I hate the way you drive my car.
    I hate it when you stare.
    I hate your big dumb combat boots,
    and the way you read my mind.
    I hate you so much it makes me sick;
    it even makes me rhyme.
    I hate it,
    I hate the way you're always right.
    I hate it when you lie.
    I hate it when you make me laugh,
    even worse when you make me cry.
    I hate it that you're not around,
    and the fact that you didn't call.
    But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you.
    Not even close,
    not even a little bit,
    not even at all.
    And I'm afraid to say that I prefer this poem; for all it's juvenile rhymes, it's got more structure and a certain quirkiness that yours lacks. You have a nice idea but unfortunately not an original one. Sorry.

    And I hate you for making me admit that I watched that film!

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    Sweet farewell, Good Nite
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    I sense we got ourselves a copy cat in the house!
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    "He was nauseous with regret when he saw her face again, and when, as of yore, he pleaded and begged at her knees for the joy of her being. She understood Neal; she stroked his hair; she knew he was mad."
    ---Jack Kerouac, On The Road: The Original Scroll

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    La joie de vivre naomi moon's Avatar
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    Yes I guess that's a copy cut.
    "La dignité n'est qu'un paravent placé par l'orgueil et derrière lequel nous enrageons à notre aise." Honoré de balzac.
    "La réalité implacable me conduirait au suicide si le rêve ne me permettait d'attendre". Guy de Maupassant.

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