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    Wild is the Wind Silas Thorne's Avatar
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    Summer raindrops fall
    Jurassic echoes,
    pushing round sets and subsets
    into morning's lake.
    Last edited by Silas Thorne; 02-15-2009 at 09:15 PM.

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    The Poetic Warrior Dark Muse's Avatar
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    Interesting, quite short, but rather moving, some lovely imagery

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    I like the whole thing but in particular, these lines:

    Quote Originally Posted by Silas Thorne View Post
    Summer raindrops fall
    Jurassic echoes,
    pushing round sets and subsets
    into morning's lake.
    Nice!

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