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  1. #1
    Grim Reaper
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    Leaving...

    I'm breaking the chains
    Leaving you
    Good-bye
    I don't know what else to do

    I tried to make it
    But i failed
    No longer can i fake it
    Sorry

    With one foot out the door
    Memories flood me
    Hit the floor
    No more!

    Do i have the strength to leave?
    Can i do it this time?
    Chest heaves
    Slam!

    I'm gone
    "My body won't succumb to my heart and it's tearing me apart"

    "There is no point to democracy when ignorance is celebrated"

  2. #2
    Registered User
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    Really liked these lines:

    With one foot out the door
    Memories flood me
    Hit the floor
    No more!

    Simple words, so simply put, yet, say so much........
    You cannot build a future from the debris of the past

  3. #3
    Grim Reaper
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    thank you!
    "My body won't succumb to my heart and it's tearing me apart"

    "There is no point to democracy when ignorance is celebrated"

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