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    to be continued...

    Mind's half made up
    Yet pressure's still sky high
    One side's relieved
    The other's going to die

    I signed the papers now
    Reply came through a different media
    I told him "I don't need ya"
    Yet he still wants to give into the numerous criteria



    Yes I remember you're there on the other end of the bridge
    And I'm trying to cross over
    But he's still pulling at my wrist..

    wrist...

    I try to pull away..
    The struggle rips old wounds..
    A shiny drop of blood sneaks out like a person coming out from a mother's womb..

    Several drops follow the first..
    Amazing how it quenches such thirst..

    Overwhelmed with satisfaction I pull harder this time..
    Pardon me but in life couldn't provide a better rhyme..

    Whoever it may be
    Let this be a tribute to thee..


    Will I make the right choice or will I be fooled!!??
    I've yet to find out..

    Thus, to be continued....................
    Last edited by EpItApH; 04-28-2006 at 06:09 PM.
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    What no comments for this?
    Is it not good?
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