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    an innate contradiction verybaddmom's Avatar
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    Almost. Close to it.
    but i cant quite reach the top
    am i doomed to fail?
    Then we sat on the edge of the earth, with our feet dangling over the side, and marvelled that we had found each other.

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    am i doomed to fail?
    why is this hook in my mouth?
    remove it, dammit!
    shh!!!
    the air and water have been here a long time, and they are telling stories.

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    remove it, dammit!
    one by one and step by step
    put the shoes away
    You're just another bastard.

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    put the shoes away
    we'll go no more a-roving
    plagiarism's fun
    If you had to live with this you'd rather lie than fall.
    You think I can't fly? Well, you just watch me!

    ~The Dresden Dolls

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    plagarism's fun
    but i am so fond of my
    own ideas too
    Then we sat on the edge of the earth, with our feet dangling over the side, and marvelled that we had found each other.

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    that last sentence has only 4 syllables?
    You're just another bastard.

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    own i de as too - 5
    Last edited by amuse; 05-29-2004 at 11:59 PM.
    shh!!!
    the air and water have been here a long time, and they are telling stories.

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    I don't get it. "my" is on the second line, though
    You're just another bastard.

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    omg, as if we are going to be this argumentative over one frigging syllable:
    own i de as too
    Then we sat on the edge of the earth, with our feet dangling over the side, and marvelled that we had found each other.

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    own ideas too
    yiddish to the rescue once
    again: ay guvalt!


    that's phonetically spelled, btw. don't give me **** about it alright.
    shh!!!
    the air and water have been here a long time, and they are telling stories.

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    *no one mentioned that that's a really sucky line to try to build on

    own ideas too
    and you shall render useless
    destructive weapons
    If you had to live with this you'd rather lie than fall.
    You think I can't fly? Well, you just watch me!

    ~The Dresden Dolls

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    for such a sucky line, you guys managed quite nicely, twice.
    i think this thread seems to be fairly critical today. i am going to the garden to eat worms.
    no more poetry for you!
    Then we sat on the edge of the earth, with our feet dangling over the side, and marvelled that we had found each other.

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    *oops!

    Again: ay guvalt!
    Holy moley! Sacre bleu!
    ...and other outbursts
    If you had to live with this you'd rather lie than fall.
    You think I can't fly? Well, you just watch me!

    ~The Dresden Dolls

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    It's what we do.
    If you had to live with this you'd rather lie than fall.
    You think I can't fly? Well, you just watch me!

    ~The Dresden Dolls

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    oh.... I got it NOW!
    In the meantime, I will refrain from writing the next poem...
    You're just another bastard.

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