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    a dark soul Haunted's Avatar
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    touch into frenzy
    un-touch for momentary
    sanity and sense
    Last edited by Haunted; 06-16-2009 at 08:34 PM.

    "But do you really, seriously, Major Scobie," Dr. Sykes asked, "believe in hell?"
    "Oh, yes, I do."
    "In flames and torment?"
    "Perhaps not quite that. They tell us it may be a permanent sense of loss."
    "That sort of hell wouldn't worry me," Fellowes said.
    "Perhaps you've never lost anything of importance," Scobie said.

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    sanity and sense
    leave them aside for a while
    touch touch touch and touch!
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    When asked how World War III would be fought, Einstein replied that he didn't know. But he knew how World War IV would be fought: With sticks and stones.
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    touch touch touch and touch!
    your belly's so happy now!
    finger-paint romance

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    finger-paint romance
    sketch rocks, mountains ,caves and trees
    territory's yours!
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    When asked how World War III would be fought, Einstein replied that he didn't know. But he knew how World War IV would be fought: With sticks and stones.
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    territory's yours!
    It's manifest destiny!
    never mind squatters!

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    never mind squatters
    they won't tell if you don't and
    you might be grateful
    "It is not the rich man you should properly call happy, but him who knows with wisdom how to use the blessings of the gods, to endure hard poverty, and who fears dishonor worse than death, and is not afraid to die for cherished friends or fatherland."

    - Horace

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    you might be grateful
    for the warmth left in the fire
    after ashes form

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    after ashes form
    and blacken the fireplace
    docendo discimus

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    where's your final line?

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    (Fixed )
    after ashes form
    and blacken the fireplace
    where's your final line?

    where's your final line?
    after epilogue's finish
    could be a sequel

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    Quote Originally Posted by just mercedes View Post
    where's your final line?
    Sorry, I thought we were using the last line of one haiku to start another.
    docendo discimus

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    Quote Originally Posted by krymsonkyng View Post
    (Fixed )
    after ashes form
    and blacken the fireplace
    where's your final line?

    where's your final line?
    after epilogue's finish
    could be a sequel

    I'm impressed with that
    cleverly fixed, well done mate...
    you're quick on the draw!
    docendo discimus

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    Quote Originally Posted by Red-Headed View Post
    Sorry, I thought we were using the last line of one haiku to start another.
    ah, but we are... thing is you need to leave us a last line to use since you obliged this time (and with flattery too...)

    you're quick on the draw!
    gunslinger of bygone times
    dirt caked grizzly grin

    (your turn friend)
    Last edited by krymsonkyng; 06-16-2009 at 09:15 PM.

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    dirt caked grizzly grin
    for God's sake, please get a shave
    wash that grime away!
    "It's so mysterious, the land of tears."

    Chapter 7, The Little Prince ~ Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

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    wash that grime away?
    the crime scene direly disturbed
    vital prints obscured
    "It's so mysterious, the land of tears."

    Chapter 7, The Little Prince ~ Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

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