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[kiz_paws]

Intense and extreme
the emotions of lovers
giving and taking

[tailor STATELY]

giving and taking

political forsaking

grease their palms with red

[mazHur]

grease their palms with red
These cold blooded savages
Unscrupulous swines.

[kiz_paws]

giving and taking

political forsaking

grease their palms with red

Awesome, tailor!

Unscrupulous swines
spreading hate, enjoying fear
sad prayers are whispered

[mazHur]

It was so tragic
In the history of U.S
Las Vegas shooting.

[kiz_paws]

It was so tragic
In the history of U.S
Las Vegas shooting.

Amen to this beautiful haiku, Maz, thank you

We need to continue, however, with the line, sad prayers are whispered

[mazHur]

Amen to this beautiful haiku, Maz, thank you

We need to continue, however, with the line, sad prayers are whispered

Thanks, kiz_paws....yes, that was a very sad tragedy ....
I simply couldn't believe an American would commit such savagery.
Yes, this haiku surely needs the extra line you wrote ...in their memory.

[mazHur]

It is almost dawn
Still there's no sleep in my eyes
Hence no dreams to see.

[kiz_paws]

Hence no dreams to see
when all tomorrow was lost
staggering sadness

[mazHur]

Staggering sadness
Like a cloud over a cloud
Bearing lightening

[kiz_paws]

Bearing lightening
two fluffy clouds are quarrelling
a rainbow listens

[mazHur]

a rainbow listens
To the silence of colours
In every rain drop

[kiz_paws]

a rainbow listens
To the silence of colours
In every rain drop

Poetically beautiful! Excellent, Maz.

In every rain drop
is a possibility
rivers are singing

[mazHur]

Poetically beautiful! Excellent, Maz.

In every rain drop
is a possibility
rivers are singing

Thx kiz.....


rivers are singing
An ode to the melting snow
For all the blessings.

[kiz_paws]

For all the blessings
we are privy to enjoy
we should be thankful