Results 1 to 2 of 2

Thread: When Love Has No Pleasure

  1. #1
    Registered User
    Join Date
    Sep 2005
    Posts
    17
    Blog Entries
    2

    Thumbs down When Love Has No Pleasure

    WHEN LOVE HAS NO PLEASURE

    by Robert Davidson

    Yours is the heartbeat I yearn to own
    As I touch and lightly stroke your red-gold hair;
    I almost feel the kiss of you upon my mouth,
    But you push me aside, I stand in despair.

    Who has loved has lived full measure,
    Even tho' the wind sighs like a muted violin.
    But when love has no pleasure
    The tense strings throb no more.

    One starlight night I thought to steal a kiss.
    To bend your will to mine, my single goal;
    But a waning moon stared icily down,
    'Cause hurting you was like fighting my soul.

    Who has loved has lived full measure,
    Even tho' the wind sighs like a muted violin.
    But when love has no pleasure
    The tense strings throb no more.

  2. #2
    Just a weirdo
    Join Date
    Sep 2005
    Posts
    177
    'Cause hurting you was like fighting my soul.

    I could have Quoted all of it....but, this line, Awsome.

    Your an amazing man to write of love in this way.
    The woman you long for, has she an Idea of your pain?
    She'd be a fool to walk away....

    I've read the others you've posted, as I'm sure, many
    other females here have....I doubt I'm alone in saying..

    - Men could learn a lot from your grasp of Love. *dreamy sigh*

    Tense strings throb no more.

    What a Void this leaves in the heart.
    When I reached this pont, It affected my art.
    (didn't mean to rhyme, but it happens all the time)

    You never know what the future holds, When the two
    of you are ready, and your not expecting it.
    -She may be secretly wanting the renunion.

    Ohh I do, wish the best for you. I should stop now....
    I'm getting the nostolgic musshies...Dang Dude...your good.
    Last edited by Dailen; 09-29-2005 at 10:16 AM.

Similar Threads

  1. silly ruff draft.. trying to write a love poem now
    By Phoenix_Tears in forum Personal Poetry
    Replies: 5
    Last Post: 03-10-2007, 02:24 PM
  2. Falling Into Love
    By Suetang in forum Personal Poetry
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 02-23-2007, 03:04 PM
  3. What Is Love? (part 1 of 2)
    By Sitaram in forum General Writing
    Replies: 9
    Last Post: 12-15-2005, 08:17 AM
  4. About Love
    By Koa in forum Personal Poetry
    Replies: 7
    Last Post: 10-19-2005, 02:13 PM
  5. love, love , love...
    By chispa in forum Poems, Poets, and Poetry
    Replies: 5
    Last Post: 09-03-2005, 02:30 PM

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •