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Thread: Lyric Mix and match

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    Grim Reaper
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    Lyric Mix and match

    Ok, so this is pretty much a jumble of Evanescence lyrics i love, i put them together to form my own little Ppoem thingy, lol

    I'm so tired of being here
    Suppressed by all my childish fears
    When all this time i've been so hollow inside
    Fifty thousand tears i've cried...

    I'm going under
    Breathing my last breath
    All my thoughts on you
    Sweet raptured light it ends here tonight

    Don't close your eyes
    Just pray your dreams will leave you here
    Soon to be blinded by tears
    Soon you'll wake to know the truth
    I almost gone, not there

    I again lay dying, pouring crimson regret and betrayal
    Can you hear me? Can you feel me in your arms?
    Bid my blood to run..
    Before i come undone
    Can you save me from the nothing i have become?

    The truth would have driven me into madness
    You once see me bleeding my love for you
    I know you love me now
    All this rampant chaos.. your reality
    I'm sorry,tell me true.. am i to lost, to be saved?

    I'm frightened by what i see
    Fallen angels at my feet
    Death before my eyes
    Upon my end i shall begin
    Forsaking all i've fallen for i rise to meet the end-

    Don't turn away
    Don't give in to the pain
    Don't close your eyes
    Don't turn out the lights
    Never sleep never die

    I know i used lyrics from these songs Going Uunder, Bring me to life, Everybody's fool, my immortal,Tourniquet,Taking over me,My last breath,and whisper. I know it has no pattern, no structure, Bbasically i am just playing around with mix and matching lyrics. Its awfully fun.
    "My body won't succumb to my heart and it's tearing me apart"

    "There is no point to democracy when ignorance is celebrated"

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    hay i love evanescence, and i think it is really clever what you did with the lyrics.
    firestarter
    shut up and listen!*!

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    Grim Reaper
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    Omgeez.. i am in a state of shock . Ii clicked on to check my e-mail and i thought this exactly "firestarter replied to my lyric post" and i hadn't even seen that i had the auto email er. That is freaky. all week i keep having all these supernatural things happening. geezie
    "My body won't succumb to my heart and it's tearing me apart"

    "There is no point to democracy when ignorance is celebrated"

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