The early summer morning's bright,
and the vibe of a mini park's right,
so I gaze amorously
at a pink daisy nearby.
Regrettably,
she turns her goo-goo eyes
towards the nonchalant sunlight
in the distant skies.
The early summer morning's bright,
and the vibe of a mini park's right,
so I gaze amorously
at a pink daisy nearby.
Regrettably,
she turns her goo-goo eyes
towards the nonchalant sunlight
in the distant skies.
Try to live in harmony with people and nature
Charming and humorous poem! itīs good to have you posting again, angliholic.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Thanks, Danik, for your feedback, but why did you think it's charming? Which part is charming?Originally Posted by Danik 2016
Try to live in harmony with people and nature
The images and the composition are charming, the flower instead of a woman.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Thanks, Danik, for the crystal clear feedback.
Try to live in harmony with people and nature
Enjoyed the "vibe" of a subject so tender.
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Thanks, Tailor, for reading and the encouraging comment.
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Try to live in harmony with people and nature
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