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    It wasn't me Jerrybaldy's Avatar
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    Parelell bars

    Life is pretty f ucking cool
    When you're drunk
    And the music's good,
    Then it's the next day
    Unrequited reality
    And you have to speak to someone
    Who doesn't care about you
    And talks of stuff you don't care about
    Then it's crap again
    Doing stuff you haven't got time
    In your life to do
    Oh oh, did your brothers wife's
    Sister really say that?
    That's excellent
    Now f uck off
    As I want to dance to a piano player
    With bleeding fingers,
    Kiss the lady next to me
    And burn my mouth with whisky.

    For those who believe,
    no explanation is necessary.
    For those who do not,
    none will suffice.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jerrybaldy View Post
    Life is pretty f ucking cool
    When you're drunk
    And the music's good,
    Then it's the next day
    Unrequited reality
    And you have to speak to someone
    Who doesn't care about you
    And talks of stuff you don't care about
    Then it's crap again
    Doing stuff you haven't got time
    In your life to do
    Oh oh, did your brothers wife's
    Sister really say that?
    That's excellent
    Now f uck off
    As I want to dance to a piano player
    With bleeding fingers,
    Kiss the lady next to me
    And burn my mouth with whisky.
    "Then it's the next day
    Unrequited reality"... been there done that, long ago. Great to see you writing

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    what if I were to bare my soul
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    7-8-2015

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    It wasn't me Jerrybaldy's Avatar
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    Thank you

    Quote Originally Posted by tailor STATELY View Post
    "Then it's the next day
    Unrequited reality"... been there done that, long ago. Great to see you writing

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
    tailor
    Thanks Tailor. For 13 years now you have taken the time to comment on my ramblings. None of them deserved your attention and yet you gave it. It didn't go unnoticed

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    You're very welcome... don't sell yourself short with your poetry

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
    tailor
    tailor

    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    This has got a beatnik lifestyle vibe to it. I feel you would have totally jived in the Beatnik days Jerry

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    love this one.

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