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    It wasn't me Jerrybaldy's Avatar
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    Not forgotten

    I will not forget you,
    you swam out to sea
    Spitting salt, horse dancing
    Screaming get me out.
    Up and down like a fisherman's float
    Crazy in your eyes
    Like you were never coming home
    To the hug of a warm towel
    Thrashing like there were drums
    Sea urchins for eyes
    Tentacles around your silky thighs
    Mouth wide
    Drinking it in
    I will not forget you
    I waved as you caught my eye
    I mouthed I L Y
    And wiggled my toes in the sand
    Only you were in the sea
    But from deep below
    Blind fish thrashed and fought
    To take you down
    I took a bite of my ice cream flake
    And watched you go.




    I never forgot how your hair
    Disappeared

    For those who believe,
    no explanation is necessary.
    For those who do not,
    none will suffice.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jerrybaldy View Post
    I will not forget you,
    you swam out to sea
    Spitting salt, horse dancing
    Screaming get me out.
    Up and down like a fisherman's float
    Crazy in your eyes
    Like you were never coming home
    To the hug of a warm towel
    Thrashing like there were drums
    Sea urchins for eyes
    Tentacles around your silky thighs
    Mouth wide
    Drinking it in
    I will not forget you
    I waved as you caught my eye
    I mouthed I L Y
    And wiggled my toes in the sand
    Only you were in the sea
    But from deep below
    Blind fish thrashed and fought
    To take you down
    I took a bite of my ice cream flake
    And watched you go.




    I never forgot how your hair
    Disappeared
    Enjoyed this wry poem... this ranks up there with your poem about someone writing notes while walking as a woman "falls" into a river/lake some time back

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    what if I were to bare my soul
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