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    It wasn't me Jerrybaldy's Avatar
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    Shell

    It seems
    From wrinkled beginning
    to the lost desserted shell,

    Through the decades
    Of urgent performance,
    Only my body could fail,

    My mind created falicies
    Of meaning and warmth
    And care.

    So that all the f ucking while
    I believed I was actually there.

    For those who believe,
    no explanation is necessary.
    For those who do not,
    none will suffice.

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    I realise I misspelt fallacies

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jerrybaldy View Post
    It seems
    From wrinkled beginning
    to the lost desserted shell,

    Through the decades
    Of urgent performance,
    Only my body could fail,

    My mind created falicies
    Of meaning and warmth
    And care.

    So that all the f ucking while
    I believed I was actually there.
    Fatalism ? Solipsism ? Gives food for thought... well done

    Hoping all is well,

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

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