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    magic

    indifference is
    cosy
    till it turns
    frost
    chills are made of
    loss
    in love one
    always thrills
    warmth gloss
    and relys on nothing
    but air
    it has room
    for magic
    not one tear just
    clear
    nearest and dearest
    summer brush.
    art is thrust to capture
    the image it must.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Sounds pessimistic cacian, but brings new points of views about love.
    "I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
    Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row

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    I enjoyed this little gem of yours, especially this line: indifference is cosy till it turns frost.

    Try to live in harmony with people and nature


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    enjoyed this, hard edged

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    Quote Originally Posted by Danik 2016 View Post
    Sounds pessimistic cacian, but brings new points of views about love.
    Danik thanks for reading and feedback.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Quote Originally Posted by angliholic View Post
    I enjoyed this little gem of yours, especially this line: indifference is cosy till it turns frost.
    angliholic thank you so much for reading and much enjoyed your feedback.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Quote Originally Posted by tonywalt View Post
    enjoyed this, hard edged
    tony thank you for reading it is very much appreciated.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Enjoyed very much

    "it has room for magic"...
    "art is thrust to capture
    the image it must."

    I wandered from "ghosting" to the sublimity of love in your offering.

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
    tailor
    tailor

    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    tailor STATELY many thanks for reading.
    I very much enjoyed your feedback.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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