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    Tiny Poems where a part is repeated at each new verse

    Tiny poems where a part is repeated at each new verse

    Parading

    Paracelsus
    Parataxis
    Paraglider
    Paranormal
    Paramount (pictures ?)
    Parade
    Pará.
    Last edited by Danik 2016; 05-10-2022 at 02:53 PM. Reason: mistakes

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    Damn, dawg. Tough stuff.
    Okay I'll give it a try.

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    eau d'eau

    beautiful tableau
    Thoreau's bureau
    plateau morceau

    5/11/2022

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    Piece de la resistance
    Stance of a yogi
    She is named Constance.

    (Tance)

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    ante canto/fantasia

    triumphant giant buoyant eggplants pantomime.
    chrysanthemum phantoms banter jubilantly -
    distantly enchanting verdant plant fantasies

    valiant elephants (constantly vigilant) recant
    disadvantages; meantime, resonant lanterns
    tantalize radiant mantis' antennae ante canto

    5/12/2022

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    This thread is flourishing in spite of the title I didn´t know how to correct.

    Universe
    Metadata
    Metaverse.
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    finis

    infinite
    refining
    redefining
    affinities

    5/12/2022

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    Enjoyed!

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    Love it... Something Emily Dickinson might have written had she lived in these times

    stigmata

    forgive
    forgave
    verity
    parity
    parables
    paradigm
    enigmatic
    workingman
    King

    5/13/2022

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    who am I but a stitch in time
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    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    jibber jabber

    dandelions and candy
    anticipate ants' deployments
    cloying, frenzying enzymic
    microcosmic protocols

    5/30/2022

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    who am I but a stitch in time
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    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    Synthetic and charming.

    A tiny poem
    It comprises
    the
    head
    of
    a
    pin.
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    *******editing difficulties*****
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    Yes, I have noticed some wonkiness in editing... usually duplications if you take the wrong path.

    Nice poem Lost track of what the rules are, offering this:

    Magic Mountainside

    Magic
    mountainside -
    Lupines,
    golden poppies,
    and clover
    Honeycomb attracts
    a bear

    6/1/2022

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    who am I but a stitch in time
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    7-8-2015

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    After new menace of being "banned" managed to edit the poem about. A good word "wonkiness"!

    Enjoyed your bear poem. No rules at all, the poem has just to be tiny.

    Postcard spring

    A blue butterfly
    suspended among
    bright colored flowers.

    A fixed smile
    on the face
    of nature.
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    "An unconscious butterfly" (lol)... one would expect a postcard butterfly to be static I guess.

    Revisiting soon

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