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    Biding time

    She lives in the days
    as they arrive and
    awaken her early
    (too early)

    and

    the days keep coming
    over and over

    What can she do with
    these days?

    She needs some help
    with this question:

    Bring in the minister

    a therapist

    some self-help books

    Well lots of luck, girl

    Nobody wins, just ask Caesar.
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    Interesting piece... your protagonist trying to sort out a puzzle.

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
    tailor
    tailor

    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    I like it.
    "...the ramblings of a narcissistic, self-obsessed, deranged mind."
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