Enjoyed exoplanet poem.
Challenge accepted!
Next: morning, blithe, wistful, moonstone, links, garland
The nostalgic moonstone
He used to moon wistfully but not blithely
by the window, in the morning,
dreaming about garlands and links, yes, links...
and some distant future on the moon.
Next: future, Aquarius,bay, violets, multiple, sandstorm.
Last edited by Danik 2016; 01-19-2024 at 08:23 AM.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Didn't know this definition: Links - Scotland: sand hills especially along the seashore ...
also Moon - intransitive verb. : to spend time in idle reverie : behave abstractedly. fans mooning over movie stars. (Merriam-Webster Dictionary)
Enjoyed your dreamy poem
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: future, Aquarius, bay, violets, multiple, sandstorm
1.20.2024
entering into Aquarius
rain and fog intrude upon
the wee early hours -
frogs make happy
still playing the grass widower -
now over a year
my woodstove kettle burbles
cats slumber
pensively pondering
a memorial come March
near Monterey Bay
to bid a final farewell
long delayed to a friend
- perhaps I'll leave a
bouquet of violets
if I can get there - close
to "Dennis the Menace Park"
- so Patrick... he'd die laughing
if he could
in multiple distant lands bayonets
dance, tanks roll, missiles launch -
I see a future with sandstorms
made from the rubble of man -
great haboobs scornfully scouring
the earth as a memorial to folly
... but I digress
1/20/2024
Next: rose, mode, glow, hand, redoubtable, slumber
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Last edited by tailor STATELY; 01-20-2024 at 09:03 AM. Reason: added poem / 1-less indent
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
I knew the verb "mooning" but not this meaning of link. thanks.
Enjoyed the poem particularly the contrast between the personal memorial and "the memorial to folly".
Challenge accepted!
Next: rose, mode, glow, hand, redoubtable, slumber.
redoubtable-
https://www.google.com/search?q=redo...hrome&ie=UTF-8
Minimal poem
Just a demode red rose
glowing in a gloved hand
In redoubtable slumber
Next: planets, weather beaten, storm,eruption, milk, melody.
Last edited by Danik 2016; 01-23-2024 at 08:37 AM. Reason: Correction: gloved.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Loved the minimal poem... perhaps "gloved hand" ?
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: planets, weather beaten, storm, eruption, milk, melody
sweaty frets
eruption solo, so high
planets weeping
milky way
guitar storm melody
weather beaten
sweaty frets
speed metal
apple pie
1/22/2024
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L9r-NxuYszg
Next: reflection, indigo, færies, firefly, bluebells, brolly
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Last edited by tailor STATELY; 01-22-2024 at 10:24 AM. Reason: added poem / < indent
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
re: Thanks for the correction!
Enjoyed the sweaty frets and the eruption solo (with the involuntary participation of the cigarette stub).
Challenge accepted!
Next: reflection, indigo, færies, firefly, bluebells, brolly
Indigo Reflections
Indigo loves:
jeans clothes,
bluebells,
foals,
faeries,
fireflies!
But now let me take my brolly for it is raining cats and dogs!
Next: fireworks, anthology, pathetic, chili, labor, endowment.
Last edited by Danik 2016; 01-23-2024 at 08:36 AM.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Re: video... Sorry about that; I agree, it's a pet peeve of mine also. It's very difficult to find an R&R photo/clip without the little beasties.
Lol... enjoyed... Loved the brolly stanza
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: fireworks, anthology, pathetic, chili, labor, endowment
ex libris
the anthology of man ended with
the theoretical ending of AI
Van Neumann progress through a
pathetic surreptitious backdoor
fireworks mode hack - a labor of
the last days of the last chiliad
- the crowning endowment of man
1/24/2024
Next: lend, lens, dilemma, alchemy, arrange, weary
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Last edited by tailor STATELY; 01-24-2024 at 07:35 AM. Reason: an>a / added poem / a>an
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Enjoyed your poem, in accordance with pessimistic times.
Challenge accepted!
Next: lend, lens, dilemma, alchemy, arrange, weary
Old Faust
Old Faust
wearily
arranged
his lens
and opened
the book of alchemy.
His dilemma:
to lend or not
an ear
to the ghosts
that surrounded him.
https://www.monologuearchive.com/g/goethe_001.html
Next: auspicious, electrical, ocean, concoction, magic, effects.
Last edited by Danik 2016; 01-26-2024 at 10:46 PM.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Delightful !
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: auspicious, electrical, ocean, concoction, magic, effects
corpo sancto
innocuous objects aglow
aural electrical connections
an auspicious concoction
of airy nitrogen and oxygen
drives saint elmo's fire; an
ocean of magical effects
1/27/2024
Next: parabolic, license, secret, etymology, gyrate, teach
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Mankind´s electrics?
Challenge accepted !
Next: parabolic, license, secret, etymology, gyrate, teach
Nonsensical
Getting a parabolic driving license
Diving into the secret etymology of
gyrating objects
Teaching the mechanics of
mosquito legs
Emanating an aura
of fireworks.
Next: Carnival, dances, solace, whirlwind, echo, colorful.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Brilliant nonsense poem!
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: Carnival, dances, solace, whirlwind, echo, colorful
Ode to Carnival
Carnival arrives ! an expectant
whirlwind - jubilee of jubilees !
offering a brief solacement
to the everyday cares of now high-
spirited, joyful, boisterous masses
dancing to dances rechoreographed
from colorful parades past to the
raucous, rhythmic, oft syncopated
music of samba schools vying one
with another - their volumes cranked
up to eleven as floats festively
adorned pass by and revelers exult
dancing on and on and on and on...
1/30/2024
Next: petrichor, gloaming, virga, nightingale, crescent moon, wisp
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Last edited by tailor STATELY; 01-30-2024 at 11:56 AM. Reason: added poem / format / one more !
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Enjoyed the Carnival poem . That's exactly it.
Challenge accepted!
Next: petrichor, gloaming, virga, nightingale, crescent moon, wisp
Under the Crescent Moon
The smell of petrichor
pervades the air
after the swift rain,
while a sole nightingale
in the gloaming hours
sings a solo to the virga
lulling the soft wisps of grass
to sleep.
Next: abundant, epiphany, litany, sojourn, enbankment, tide.
(with acrostic)
Last edited by Danik 2016; 01-31-2024 at 08:48 AM.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Wonderful !
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: abundant, epiphany, litany, sojourn, embankment, tide
soliloquy of loneliness
my silent litany of wonderment
fell upon the full moon this even-
tide as I sojourn on the way
listening to the echoing wail of a
loon - its soliloquy of loneliness
beyond an embankment I espied
a great abundance of fireflies
frolicking nearby sleepy færies
settling down to bed who shooed
them gently away when flying nigh
the stars seemed to leap closer
as my litany ended and wonder
upon wonder an epiphany entered
into my mind of an everlasting joy
if I but held my righteous course
2/1/2024
Next: roundabout, feather, brilliant, poetic fires, muse, cloak
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Last edited by tailor STATELY; 02-01-2024 at 07:58 AM. Reason: added poem
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Enjoyed the soliloque (AIIIIIIIIIIIIIII)!
Challenge accepted!
PS-Name of the new fruit and veggies store to be opened next week: Petrichor! Had never read that word before!
Next: roundabout, feather, brilliant, poetic fires, muse, cloak
Muses or Heroes
Poetic fires roundabout
are often inspired
by iconic images
taken out or not
of real life.
Muses or heroes
are celebrated
by the feather
in all their brilliance
or under the discreet cloak
of anonymity!
Next: myth(s), legend, status, aspire, ancient, vivid.
Last edited by Danik 2016; 02-04-2024 at 01:43 PM.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Enjoyed... "celebrated / by the feather / in all their brilliance / or under the discreet cloak / of anonymity!"
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: myth(s), legend, status, aspire, ancient, vivid
aspire
ancient wisdom says
aspirers dream
beyond the status quo
vivid imaginings of
mythic proportions
the means by which
legends are made
2/7/2024
Next: silhouette, pendulum, mystic, vignette, spectral, whisper
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Last edited by tailor STATELY; 02-07-2024 at 10:14 PM. Reason: added poem
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Loved the version of the birth of legends.
Challenge accepted.
Next: silhouette, pendulum, mystic, vignette, spectral, whisper
A nightmare
A dream comes back to me
in vignettes:
the pendulum of the clock stops.
A slight silhouette appears
on the opposite wall in my room
and a spectral voice whispers:
I'm the ghost of a love
from a past life,
A wake up,bathed in sweat.
No, no ghosts or mystical experiences for me!
Next:lightening, flash, murmur, silver, ecstasy, battle.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
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