Next: page, glide, zone, abstract, wisp, echo
The next page
Blank page
Abstract zone
Letters gliding
over the paper
Wisps whispering:
Echo, echo, echo
New challenge: font, power, star, rendering,visibly, tangle.
Next: page, glide, zone, abstract, wisp, echo
The next page
Blank page
Abstract zone
Letters gliding
over the paper
Wisps whispering:
Echo, echo, echo
New challenge: font, power, star, rendering,visibly, tangle.
Last edited by Danik 2016; 05-21-2023 at 08:35 PM.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
EnjoyedChallenge accepted !
star
star - font of power
visibly rendering light
a quantum tangle
5/21/2023
Next: age, power, humanity, wind, island, paradox
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Last edited by tailor STATELY; 05-22-2023 at 04:17 AM. Reason: indent / added my attempt at challenge :) / etc
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Charming synthesis!
Challenge accepted!
Next: age, power, humanity, wind, island, paradox
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Next: age, power, humanity, wind, island, paradox
The paradox of humanity
Does humanity progress with age?
I donīt think so.
The thirst after power and fame
Is to great.
Wisdom touches it
only lightly as the soft wind
that sweeps over a small island bends
the vegetation slightly
without leaving a stronger mark.
New challenge: chance, theater, evolving, crossing, ethereal, beings.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Excellent ! Thoughtful and soulful poem... enjoyed very much
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Challenge: chance, theater, evolving, crossing, ethereal, beings
Commendaces & Consolation
Xyphon, I, a lowly man, did journey by and by
aye, did chance upon Phrontis' lonely mound
renowned Menelaus himself mournfully wrought -
shot dead was Phrontis by the vengeful Apollo
Hollow are the beings who've stopped evolving
solving naught but imputed impediments -
predicaments of desiccated human theater -
greater an epic tragic ode of consequences alike
Belike crossing ethereal waters without a drachma,
ah, insufficient for the ferryman's fare thereupon
5/23/2023
Next: balance, frame, bubble, density, vision, pyramid
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Enjoyed this Homer inspired poem and its musings
Challenge accepted!
Challenge: balance, frame, bubble, density, vision, pyramid
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Challenge: balance, frame, bubble, density, vision, pyramid
I and the bubble
I live in a bubble
Sometimes it is round
and I must be cautious,
for, as the ground keeps
gliding away under my feet,
owning to the bubble's
continuous movement,
there is a lot of
stumbling.
At
other times
the bubble becomes
a lofty and dense pyramid
offering a distant vision of summits.
I balance between these two frames,
but I canīt format them.
They keep escaping me.
Last edited by Danik 2016; 05-26-2023 at 01:32 PM.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
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New challenge: transcendence, inspiration, jolly, grapes, implying, world.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Imaginative... enjoyed
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Challenge: transcendence, inspiration, jolly, grapes, implying, world
Transcendence at 4th and Vine
transcendence is jolly for grapes implying
spirited wines or brandies - whilst those whose
inspiration lies in the world of sobriety acquit
themselves as candies, jams, and jellies
5/27/2023
Next: fossil, landscape, Venus, tangle, empire, whisper
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Last edited by tailor STATELY; 05-27-2023 at 07:17 AM. Reason: date / while>whilst
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Thanks for the correction. Have to include it aboveOriginally Posted by tailor STATELY
Excellent ! Thoughtful and soulful poem... enjoyed very much
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Enjoyed the "sweet" poem.
Next: fossil, landscape, Venus, tangle, empire, whisper
Oil race
Entire empires whisper wistfully
about secret fossil landscapes,
yielding the precious petrol.
There is more than one Venus necessary,
To unmake entanglements.
Next challenge: vessel, amplitude, journey, traveling, lingo, inviting.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Thanx
Enjoyed "Oil race"... yes, too many entanglements indeed.
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Challenge: vessel, amplitude, journey, traveling, lingo, inviting
future extinctions
perhaps you've never heard of me -
a new world spirit vessel of the old
forest - it would take quite some time
traveling - a journey to where tall
lush trees whose amplitude once flor-
ished where we olingos loved to get
lost in, now an uninviting oblivion
5/28/2023
Next: distortion, paint, laugh, elbow, spider, lonely
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Last edited by tailor STATELY; 05-28-2023 at 05:16 AM. Reason: indent / travelling UK > traveling US
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
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