"that interlude 'twixt dusk and dawn". Sad and impressive!Enjoyed!
Challenge accepted!
Next: shrike, beauty, thrilling, metaphor, spice, fog
Metaphors
There certainly are
spicy metaphors of beauty
Venus with or without arms.
exuberant flowers
gorgeous birds.
But nothing thrilling about
the diminutive but cruel shrike.
His colors shine modestly
through the thick fog
of representation.
Next:interlude, radio, satellite, voice,history, pregnant.
Last edited by Danik 2016; 09-22-2023 at 11:07 PM.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Enjoyed very much - "the diminutive but cruel shrike. / His colors shine modestly / through the thick fog / of representation"
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: interlude, radio, satellite, voice, history, pregnant
fellow traveler: October 4, 1957
a pregnant pause ensued
an historic interlude
when on radios and tellies
worldwide a somber voice
proclaimed a satellite
innocently named Sputnik
had been deployed hurtling
unseen in orbit ratcheting
up the Cold War tensions
several frisson notches
9/23/2023
Next: polarize, blissful, silence, methodic, starlight, passers-by
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Last edited by tailor STATELY; 09-23-2023 at 04:25 AM.
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Enjoyed this historic poem!
Challenge accepted!
Next: polarize, blissful, silence, methodic, starlight, passers-by
En passant
Let´s not polarize opinions, rumors,shrill shrieks
Let´s enjoy the blissful silence
and appreciate the methodical starlight
that every night bathes the world.
Aren´t we just passers-by?
Next: lines, thorough, keys, endow, waterfront, luminous.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Wonderful poem and title
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Challenge: lines, thorough, keys, endow, waterfront, luminous
music once played brightly
ghostliness pervades
a waterfront once graced
thoroughly luminous
with bright halogen lights
endowed further at times
with a full moon which
harbored no monkeyshines
whilst a jazz festival played
much to the delight of
music purist and tagalongs
now gone but for memories
9/24/2023
Next: swarm, exotic, skeleton, poetry, dance, twilight
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Last edited by tailor STATELY; 09-24-2023 at 04:47 AM. Reason: syntax
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Enjoyed this nostalgic poem with two tricky word usages.
Challenge accepted!
Next:swarm, exotic, skeleton, poetry, dance, twilight
An exotic view
Dark poetry:
Skeletons dance,
swarm in the twilight,
in joyous shakes
then disappear again
in the cupboard.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O42eB4KJO3Q&t=60s
Opening of the serie Pé na Cova(One Foot in the Grave).
Next: Sunshine, coast, romping, puppies, factory, bells.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Enjoyed ! Goes well with the lol video
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Challenge: Sunshine, coast, romping, puppies, factory, bells
forever sunshine
a coastal factory town where the bells
tolled every Sunday for services and
occasions memorial was forever sunshine
and romping puppies (if anybody asked)
9/25/2023
Next: obelisk, ibex, hieroglyphics, sun, river, shadows
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Friendly poem!Enjoyed
Challenge accepted!
Next:obelisk, ibex, hieroglyphics, sun, river, shadows
Tableau with obelisk
The small river basks
in the sun
animals doze
in the friendly shadows
nearby an improbable obelisk
covered with hieroglyphics
exhibits the image
of an ibex.
Next: syntax, alarm, grandeur, farm, haltingly, simple
Last edited by Danik 2016; 09-26-2023 at 08:20 AM.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Very nice !!
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: syntax, alarm, grandeur, farm, haltingly, simp
perfecting the written word
a simple syntax grandeur is
desired in my written works
so as not to cause alarm
from certain word police nits
for I write most haltingly
needing to parse with spell
checkers and their ilk so the
end result upon each page
is replete and full of farm
9/26/2023
Next: corner, pizza, buttercup, align, bookshelf, sanctum
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Last edited by tailor STATELY; 09-26-2023 at 04:59 AM.
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Enjoyed! Learned a meaning of farm I didn´t know.
Challenge accepted!
Next: corner, pizza, buttercup, align, bookshelf, sanctum
Favorite things
Pizza Margherita at the corner,
aligned pansies or buttercups,
cats relaxing on windows sills
and a secret bookshelf,
as the innermost sanctum
of treasures of fiction.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=33o32C0ogVM&t=52s
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Wonderful poemEnjoyed the video short too.
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Thanks!
Forgive my old head!
Next: airplane, head, ancient, clouds, evergreen, whilfully.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: airplane, head, ancient, clouds, evergreen, whilfully
the wisdom of trees
wizened ancient evergreens below
bear witness of the miracles of
modern flight as an airplane takes
its head droning whilfully through
clouds above on a blustery day - they
pondered and pronounced amongst
themselves that sparrows and spotted
owls and pileated woodpeckers are
far better suited for their boughs
9/27/2023
Next: divest, pearl, indigo, shallows, secrets, contact
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Last edited by tailor STATELY; 09-27-2023 at 08:05 AM. Reason: added poem
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Enjoyed that poem very much!
Challenge accepted!
Next: divest, pearl, indigo, shallows, secrets, contact
Divested of Pearls...
Divested of pearls
the indigo blue sea
secretly contacts
the continental shores,
waving in wonderous waves,
shedding shallow shells.
Next: mountain slope, antelopes, efforts, advance, rust, somewhere.
Last edited by Danik 2016; 09-27-2023 at 10:12 PM.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
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