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    Amusement Park

    Amusement Park

    It's so much fun
    to love going to
    the amusement park.

    Who doesn't get a
    thrill riding
    up into the clouds
    and screaming while
    rolling down the other side?

    It's a wholesome
    natural high
    a safe addiction
    that leaves you looking for the
    next ride.

    So your in a low
    dark rainy valley
    and you want a
    mountain peak
    to climb?

    You have a vitamin
    D deficiency.

    My peaks can't
    give you the sun
    you need
    because its always
    snowing here
    for 6 months
    straight.

    They are...
    Well, they just
    aren't sufficient
    to meet your
    meeds.

    Move along
    and find
    another mountain
    To climb.

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    It's a wonderful ride while reading this poem of yours. And of course, I have to read between the lines. Well done.

    Try to live in harmony with people and nature


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    It wasn't me Jerrybaldy's Avatar
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    Fun like the amusement parks you write of.

    For those who believe,
    no explanation is necessary.
    For those who do not,
    none will suffice.

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    Yeah...the subject matter is pretty unappealing.

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