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    It wasn't me Jerrybaldy's Avatar
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    It's okay.

    Sat on your swing
    Sucking a cigarette
    White dress with violets
    Clinging your body
    In linen
    I knew you'd kill me
    I freeze framed you on a backward swing
    Hair drifted in the air,
    Young skin
    And butterflies.
    I'm swinging in the gallows
    Dancing for my peers
    In ancient darkness, to jeers,
    You in the afternoon sun
    With dog s hit beneath your
    Converse
    Blowing smoke
    To a dandelion clock
    Three o'clock
    The red admiral agrees
    The pretty birds are dieing
    In the trees.
    Dead dogs dragged across hungry grass
    By their leads,
    I knew all along
    From the very first day.
    You'd kill me.
    Last edited by Jerrybaldy; 12-20-2021 at 04:31 AM.

    For those who believe,
    no explanation is necessary.
    For those who do not,
    none will suffice.

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    ah, love it. reminds me of bukowski

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    It wasn't me Jerrybaldy's Avatar
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    Thanks Tony and thanks for all your appreciation of previous posts.

    For those who believe,
    no explanation is necessary.
    For those who do not,
    none will suffice.

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    I love this gem too but not so sure what it tried to convey.

    Try to live in harmony with people and nature


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    It wasn't me Jerrybaldy's Avatar
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    I was going for the martydom of love

    For those who believe,
    no explanation is necessary.
    For those who do not,
    none will suffice.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jerrybaldy View Post
    I was going for the martydom of love
    Thanks for the enlightenment, and now I get a vague picture.

    Try to live in harmony with people and nature


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