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    Peter helps

    Peter had a habit of stopping people
    in the street and asking them about
    their problems

    He would inform them of the solutions
    Peter would look for people in trouble

    and tell them what to do about their trouble,
    even though Peter was problematic

    Peter could not do anything practical
    like carrying groceries for the elderly,
    as he a bad back and other ailments

    When the young people had issues
    they would come to Peter because they

    knew that Peter also had issues
    and would listen to them.

    I had not seen Peter in years, but saw him
    last summer, outside a bar

    he was drenched in sweat, stomping up to people
    and screaming,
    "WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM?!" "WHAT IS WRONG?!"

    the people looked into Peter's blazing eyes
    and walked away

    Problem solved.
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    I like it.
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    I enjoyed your poem, Tony!
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    Good job Tony. Best thing I've ever read that you've written ��

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    I had a good laugh while reading this. Thanks for this funny read.

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