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    riding a cosmic vortex MystyrMystyry's Avatar
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    Ten Years

    Walking through the park with Frippy

    Recalling the past

    Mothers wheeling prams

    Old men stalemating

    Kids slipping down the dippery

    Birds sizing up crumbs


    Squeaks

    Squips

    Squeals

    Squawks


    But now silence

    Except for the rain

    Wind

    Thunder


    I pat Frippy's head and watch her diodes light up


    And we walk home through the wet leaves and lightning

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    On the road, but not! Danik 2016's Avatar
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    That is beautiful and soo fitting!
    #Stay home as much as you can and stay well

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    Nice!
    "...the ramblings of a narcissistic, self-obsessed, deranged mind."
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    really love this. existential, bukowskiesque poem

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