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    Room 402

    "We think differently after dark"
    she said
    lying back languidly
    Then she sighed and looked away
    lighting a cigarette for me and
    raising her anatomy from the bed
    moving through the stillness of
    of a 2 a.m. hotel room

    (Oh yes, There are unquestionable signs
    of trouble, but we have days
    and weeks still

    let me dwell on you awhile)
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    Good capture of atmosphere.

    Well done.

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