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    sudden

    I could amuse
    myself with threads
    of words
    they make the world
    go heard
    birds biblical fly magical
    but I chose to prove
    myself
    conversations
    radical
    meaningless or hypothetical
    transform lives for many
    and others
    opinions reach out
    ideas deep down
    the enamel of industrial
    panels
    turn a rare atom
    ideal sudden
    happens
    the moon rays in crystal
    patterns
    lullaby in matins.
    Last edited by cacian; 12-02-2020 at 12:59 PM.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    "ideas deep down
    the enamel of industrial
    panels
    turn a rare atom
    ideal sudden
    happens
    the moon rays in crystal
    patterns
    lullaby in matins."
    Loved these images, cacian!
    "I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
    Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row

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    Danik so glad you like those lines and thank you for reading.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Love this poem ! ... has an Emily Dickinson quality about it.

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
    tailor
    Last edited by tailor STATELY; 03-09-2022 at 07:27 AM. Reason: misspell
    tailor

    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    tailor STATELY many thanks for reading.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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