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    boundless

    there is nothing
    more remarkable
    then slim tangible
    probing eligible
    to walk on a thin line
    hopelessly lonesome

    to lose all immunities
    abrasive

    to be left open
    to criticisms without
    phrases
    impossible

    and
    to cherish all that has
    vanished without traces and
    feel untarnished
    vulnerable

    to impact such cases
    fearsome
    it simply amazes
    one manages invincible
    with a force
    that trespasses
    decay and pauses rages

    the mind wages
    life is made for tasers
    and unphases
    inevitable
    never ending is pages.

    defiance
    a courtier in faience
    not science
    may chip but rarely drips
    mosaic clips
    the air crisps
    such talent grips!
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    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    On the road, but not! Danik 2016's Avatar
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    Wow!There are strong sentiments behind that poem, cacian!
    "I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
    Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row

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    Danik many thank you for reading and feedback.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    On the road, but not! Danik 2016's Avatar
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    You are welcome!
    "I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
    Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row

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    Nice one Cacian.

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