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    Lying there in the afterglow

    She asks him,
    "what are you thinking?"

    Perhaps she wants to
    hear about his past,
    and him staggering
    across concrete lots
    searching for neon

    or maybe she wants to know
    of the strange loneliness of
    the present,
    filled with legs, arms,
    torsos gripped together.


    (She is right to ask).

    We do not have long

    a night...a day...
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    Did you edit it, Tony? I liked specially what I remember being the first end.
    #Stay home as much as you can and stay well

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    Quote Originally Posted by Danik 2016 View Post
    Did you edit it, Tony? I liked specially what I remember being the first end.
    I did. I thought it too much of a muchness, but, good, just too much throw up.

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