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    and the face of the east

    and the face of the east
    rose high over the horizon
    to blast light and uv and heat
    over the ramshackle detritus

    cleansing the landscape of
    the bugs worms and germs
    remaining from yesterday
    to make way for a new future

    long shadows grow shorter
    as the radiation zaps deep
    into the cracks and slowly
    begins to break it all down

    the concrete will crumble
    the roads will buckle to dust

    and the weeds

    push through

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    Enjoyed. Well written.

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    Good atmosphere building in there.
    "Some things in life need solitude to thrive. Will only flourish in seclusion and loneliness, without affection hushing and lulling them to sleep.
    The pursuit of dreams is such a thing."

    Tom Fitch - Intersection Diaries

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