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    confidentially pleased cacian's Avatar
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    rightly

    if only slightly
    life would
    approach
    minimal highly
    too much can
    be mildly preposterous
    engagements of any kind
    Protagoras
    human rhythm
    turns schism
    impossible
    envisage
    sense
    without wrecking
    borders
    If this what time
    hoarders
    led glaze
    it would weigh
    feeling heavy
    it gives up on many
    sorry never felt so happy.
    Last edited by cacian; 09-04-2020 at 10:38 AM.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    On the road, but not! Danik 2016's Avatar
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    "envisage
    sense
    without wrecking
    borders"
    That´s so necessary! Thank you, cacian!
    "I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
    Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row

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    Enjoyed your poem, cacian... much to ponder.

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
    tailor
    tailor

    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    confidentially pleased cacian's Avatar
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    Danik and tailor STATELY many thanks for reading and feedback.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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