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    It wasn't me Jerrybaldy's Avatar
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    A way through

    There was a way through
    The blackberry bushes
    That scratched your skin with purple stains
    You showed me your breasts
    By the elm before the disease
    That kissed death
    Quitely
    There was a way through
    The blackberry bushes
    Back home
    The sun was shining
    For sure
    Exposing you for what you are
    Nipples
    And thorns
    It's dinner time
    My knees are scabbed
    I'm heading home.

    For those who believe,
    no explanation is necessary.
    For those who do not,
    none will suffice.

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    Registered User tailor STATELY's Avatar
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    Enjoyed.

    I had to look up "quitely": without making much noise?: nope... Definition of quitely obsolete: ENTIRELY, QUITE.

    Innocence lost perhaps...

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
    tailor
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    tailor

    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    A baldy classic.




    J

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    Much enjoyed.
    Thank you for posting.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    This. Perhaps one of your best.

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    The pains we go through to hide what we are.

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    Thanks all. Sorry for my tardiness I'm not around so much these days. The Quitely was a typo tailer. Thanks Tony Cacian and Shadow for your kind words.
    And Jack of Hearts where did you spring up from? Feel like I haven't heard from you in years. I posted a tribute poem to you once. Yet you don't write you don't call 😆. Great to hear from you mate.
    Thanks again all

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    Watcha, JB. Nice to see your shades of bitter cropping their unique fruit. Stay well and productive.

    Live long and prosper - H

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