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    Alive

    You are alive
    and reading this

    Now close your eyes.
    I am there
    under your lids
    in the darkness.
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    Don't drown in my cataracts. Oh, I kid, I kid.

    Actually, this piece isn't bad, and that goes for the short poem posted after this one.

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    I liked this exceedingly. Good poetry has this gift of making the not thought of sound natural.
    "I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
    Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row

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    Quote Originally Posted by Danik 2016 View Post
    I liked this exceedingly. Good poetry has this gift of making the not thought of sound natural.
    Thanks Danik!

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    This is creepy in a great way!
    "...the ramblings of a narcissistic, self-obsessed, deranged mind."
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    Thanks!

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