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    Alive

    You are alive
    and reading this

    Now close your eyes.
    I am there
    under your lids
    in the darkness.
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    Don't drown in my cataracts. Oh, I kid, I kid.

    Actually, this piece isn't bad, and that goes for the short poem posted after this one.

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    I liked this exceedingly. Good poetry has this gift of making the not thought of sound natural.
    #Stay home as much as you can and stay well

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    Quote Originally Posted by Danik 2016 View Post
    I liked this exceedingly. Good poetry has this gift of making the not thought of sound natural.
    Thanks Danik!

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    This is creepy in a great way!
    "...the ramblings of a narcissistic, self-obsessed, deranged mind."
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    Thanks!

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