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    A man with not much to lose

    A man with not much to lose,
    searching purpose, island hopping in his sailboat to somewhere,
    ran into a storm and safely docked at a small Caribbean island
    about 2 miles in length populated by about
    a thousand islanders - mostly fishermen. It had clean streets,
    tidy New England style clapboard houses, cozy pubs and a
    blue-green lagoon with fishing boats sleepily nodding in the
    water. He docked the sailboat and wandered into the
    pub close by, ordered beer and grilled fish and watched the
    rain falling through the porthole window
    The grilled fish was fresh and light and the beer cold
    The fishermen in the pub seemed unhurried, with quiet eyes
    They bantered with the bartender in a cool pleasant way that
    seemed familiar to the man - it echoed a
    simpler time and place. The waitress was ethereal and attractive
    with a clean laugh - and talking with her stirred feelings of
    nostalgia within him.

    He finished the meal and drank another beer while
    listening to the rain pattering on the tin roof - cocooned by
    blue seas and thought:
    I should stay here and not go back home. A man could reinvent himself
    in a place like this. I will make some inquiries

    But the storm passed and the fishermen got
    back on their boats.
    And as if by nature: The man returned to his sailboat,
    undid the lines and sailed away slowly, listening to
    gentle waves washing against the boat.
    As the island became smaller behind him
    he did not look back.

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    On the road, but not! Danik 2016's Avatar
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    Loved this narrative poem, Tony. It is just fiction, but I hope the sailor found a good port.
    "I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
    Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row

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    Quote Originally Posted by Danik 2016 View Post
    Loved this narrative poem, Tony. It is just fiction, but I hope the sailor found a good port.
    I hope so. I imagine him to be a Searcher, though....always looking into the existential vastness. Then again- that's fiction! It's all made up

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    Anyway, it´s great to have you writing or just posting your poems, Tony!
    "I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
    Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row

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    Really liked this one, a lot said in very few words.

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