it is a little bit
lonely
when silence homely
solidify
hearing anxious
runs out of functions
and registers tensions
life ventures electrify
sound vibrations rise
and purifies the only way is high
low says bye.
it is a little bit
lonely
when silence homely
solidify
hearing anxious
runs out of functions
and registers tensions
life ventures electrify
sound vibrations rise
and purifies the only way is high
low says bye.
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
With apology I used your poem as a word list and came up with:
anxiety (dis-assembled)
bit anxious -
a homely low
... way it is
of ventures... little
lonely is the only high
when tensions rise and
functions electrify
hearing runs out -
sound vibrations solidify
silence registers
life says:
"bye"
and purifies
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Hi, cacian,
I identified myself perfectly with these verses:
"it is a little bit
lonely
when silence homely
solidify
hearing anxious
runs out of functions
and registers tensions"
Enjoyed also tailor´s version.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Sorry for the confusion... Found Poetry:In my version I only used your words (35 total) essentially just re-arranging the words you used (and added none), and adding line breaks and punctuation as needed; it makes for a bit of a stilted presentation in spots (which I may revise at some later point). So, it's a found poem of a poemTraditionally, a found poem uses only words from the original source. However, poets have developed many ways to work with found language. Rearranging word order, inserting line breaks and stanzas, and adding new language can be part of the process. Check out these six popular approaches to creating found poems... https://www.thoughtco.com/found-poetry-4157546
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015