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    My Sun Still Shines

    A shorter snippet inspired by M4ngos haikus. Though not in the haiku fashion, it's not often I feel the liberty to write something so condensed. Its fun and challenging. Thank you m4ngo for sharing your snippets. Hope you keep adding to your collection.

    Oh, how I wanted to touch the sun!
    Or, at least, lay prostrate at his feet.
    But the closer I flew to his scorching rays
    the truer it felt,
    we were never meant to meet.

    So I worship him from afar,
    feeling a love eternally incomplete.
    Still feeling a radiating warmth
    between our estranged worlds
    from the safe heights of my dreams.
    Last edited by Shadowlight; 02-13-2020 at 12:40 AM.

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    Lovely. I will tread softly when it comes to fulfilling my goals and dreams lest I get burnt!
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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